Sunday, 13 February 2011

Unit 4- Script Second Draft

Trying to condense the 8 pages into something more managable... Haven't acieved much really, managed to shave a little over 100 words but if 1 page = 1 minute in terms of dialogue I'll still over-run :/

Here's the second more condensed draft:

UNIT 4 SECOND draft



Heres the 'Dialogue only versions of Draft One:

Unit 4 Draft Script Pure Script



and the dialogue only version of Draft Two:

UNIT 4 SECOND draft PURE SCRIPT

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